文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Dear David, I am so happy to hear that you will learn Chinese from your letter. I will introduce some ways below. Firstly, you need to improve your listening in order to understand what people say, so you can listen some material by MP3. There are a lot of listening materials on the internet, you can choose one topic which you like. Secondly,you can communicate with other people,the more spoken, the better improvement.You are reading some texts every day, then you are do your best to remember them. The last one but it is also important that you can watch movies,sing Chinese song, do anything to improve your listening and spoken. I hope you have a big improvement on learning Chines.