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字数：300 满分：100分
作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
To be a smart consumer Currently , we students are going to find a way to be smart consumers . We would like to collect all kinds of coupons in order to save money when we buy something . It's also a good choice to look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel . Besides ,we buy clothes when in a sale . In my opinion , it's a smart choice for students. On the one hand , we students have to get hard-earned money from our parents , who also told us to be careful about using money . Our parents would appreciate it if their children are doing in that way - to be smart consumers . On the another hand , it's our task to learn to plan our money in a more reasonable way , in which we ought to be thrifty . It is our tranditonal custom to be thrifty . In that way , we students can learn how to organize the moneywell and we can make good use of the money we saved , such as buying some books and doing some meaningful things . In conclusion , I prefer the idea to be a smart consumer for a student . Not only because we don't have the right to use the money at random , but because we have to form a good habit of organizing money well .
