2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

September 13 2014 people often want something for nothing，but actually,no pains no gains.I tend to acquire english,but now my english is very poor.So I start to write english diary,recording the footstep of mine. Maybe there is a few grammatical errors here and there.Can you do me a favor and point out the errors?Thanks! OK,first of all,it is a start.I'm on my way!Here we go!