2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

Nowadays,we are living in social that is rapid development times.Online shopping has been fashion.We can buy study articles,such as books、pens and others.We can also book hotel or scenic spots online,not only save we much money but also win over much time.All in all ,eating、drinking、living 、walking and so on,we can do it online. Online shopping is benefit for us ,but on the other hand it exist obviously a lot of problems.Firstly,online shopping quality has not promise,may be we get something that we buy it physical and picture are inconsistent ,and sometime its size or color are not suitable.Secondly,seller sometimes may be not keep faith,we can lose money and time.At last online shopping is not safty for our card. In my opinion,online shopping should proper,do not frequent,so that we will addiction,buy something also can help me rip out of boring life.