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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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从句使用量稍显不足;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

this is a world of internet.we nearly cannot achieve or procure anything without internet.in this highly developed world,in this global world,to communicate with other people by the internet is absolutely unavioded.and the extent you contact with other people by internet can determine the way of life and how much you can achive your value.From there,we can get information from and about other people .we can also make friends there.it seems that it has dominated the way that interpersonal communication.however,what i want to say is it does not change the essence of personal relationship.inthernet is only a tool which could lead to instantenous contact with each other. however,to add you as a friend does not necessarily mean he or she will be your real friend.instead, even someone treats you as his or her friend,he may does not need to add you in the qq or wechat.tool is just tool,it can never replace or create ture friendship.a mean to something does not mean something itself.in a world, internet is just useful to contact more people,it is useless to foster and maintain good relationship.

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