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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9028
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;文中用词稍显贫乏,同时请注意单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

The internet on learning Nowday,the internet on learning becoming popurlar.There are more and more people choice to learn on the internet.Because it have many iformations on the internet.But it have good and bad affection . On the one hand,nobody have to sure it's true more informations on the internet.We can find something from internet ,but the books haven't.For example,when we want to learn english,we can find more practices on the internet.Like learning grammer,english speaking,or hear the english radio and so on.But only reply the book,it don't have enough information.What'more,it cost money to buy the books,but learning on the internet is free.

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