高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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i used to live a samll village . there is a river wih celar water near my house . some trees around my town . Fishers play a game in the river . every people work hard whth poor . but now , big buliding stand here and some factories work day and day . everyone become rich but the envoriment became bad . No fish in the river and the amount of tree had fall down . now the first step is handle the polution