2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；句式变化多样；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

As well know the kinds of beautiful place in China,can you know where is the city with my love,i guessed you are not it can't you?i don't make you take easy of this thing.Now,please i telling you,it is a Gui Zhou province,i will speak with you for the reason. It is report that Guizhou has been around by some hills,so it is called more colorful Guizhou,of course,it is my hometown.The plenty of blue hills around our city,when you live in here you can hearing to the Bird's voice that is so lovely and bright or crisp.The nature devote to air to us,our life continuing on the earth,so the blue trees are like double parent protecting to us,the trees more aren't recorded of people. In a word, the Guizhou is a better place.Have you time you are really going to here, welcome you.