文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;能够使用一些不错的从句。
What I Think Trouble What's the trouble? The word is its meaning, it is poor and difficult, it always gets in your way in your life. Your difficulty of eighty percent is made up of your mind and heart, the left is controlled by the fact. Some people who go through little trouble gotta give up have to lose their duty are weak. However,more men that are not afraid of trouble go ahead bravely hold on to get it over. Therefore,we need right attitude to do it, the thing has a good way, of course, a bad way, whenever it is, all is like that. Finally,I add a poem which trouble is usual, victory that is realistic depends on whether you work hard and go on doing it by LiBai.