小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章从句使用不错，但句法错误较多；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏；连词使用偏少。

my friend is a teacher,she is teach English's she have a sister is teach English too. she's father is a policeman she's mother is a houswife my friend is a teacher,she is teach English's she have a sister is teach English too. she's father is a policeman she's mother is a houswife