雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

Traveling beyond national border may be a excellent experience or a fascinating dream for lots of people,and of course there are some people reject to it and some extremists even kill the people who are from other countries. Why does people object to traveling abroad?Why the tragedy that German army tried to eradicate other races around the world in 1930s happened?I think there are two main reasons.First of all,it is a great challenge for a government to tackle with that tens of thousands of people from other countries come in and go out all the times.And also the phenomenon have accelerated the diseases spreading widely,as we know,the Ebola have changed its likelihood and the speed at which it travel from one country to another. But I think the advantages is more important than the disadvantages.The world have seen the merging of economics,politics and culture of all the countries,and now it leads to a coexistence of all countries.As the time passes away,we can see the development of the cultural diversity and interdependent economic system,and this kind of interdependent coexistence can maintain the peace of the world as long as possible.