2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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It is unwise that you make your conclusion fron what you see or what you listen. sometime you see something in one side , but ignorce other sides. For example , if you want to invest a stock ,you should think over every acters that can influence your successful investment. Otherwise you do not think over something carefully, you wil lose your money even your life.