2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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It is unwise that you make your conclusion fron what you see or what you listen. sometime you see something in one side , but ignorce other sides. For example , if you want to invest a stock ,you should think over every acters that can influence your successful investment. Otherwise you do not think over something carefully, you wil lose your money even your life. In my opinion,