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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；适当丰富句式；连词使用偏少。
Hi KPOHsales. There was held showing meeting between on 15th , Dec. to and 22nd , Dec. at New jork. i had knew and interesting very much new product of your company whom product number is 5670 on that meeting. we look forward to accepting price list and instruction of your company. thanks for you cooperating. we would look to establish business relationship each other. best regards/thanks yours wu bin
