2006年考研英语作文真题:盲目的崇拜

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；多多加强句法知识；文中词汇表达丰富度要加强，同时要注意单词拼写；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

The blind worship We can see the people spents Hundreds of yuan in hair-cut in the picture, when someone is famous in field that more and more people like to standy and imitate whom stars they love,such as,go to the star "scompany and want to konw all about his things and imitate the star＇s behavior.It is not good behavior,we must be have a correct values and correct self consciousness