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When we are growing,we are always learning,learn how to be a good person.Parents give us life,give us body.how to use it depend on yourself.Someone use it make good thing for the scociety,someone does not do it.Teacher told us,you must be a good person,so that you can make you happy ,make you parents happy.make others happy.for example,when you are given seeds,you can plant it or thrash it.when you plant it ,you can do research ,make better seeds for others.