2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

September 14 2014 It is my second diary.I feel terrible today because I lose the opportunity of being a recommendable postgraduate in my school-jiangnan university.Worse,I have to re-write the diary because I had closed the web page where I wrote the diary. As we all know,one of the basic conditions of being a recommendable postgraduate is passed the CET6.Unfortunately,I just pass the CET4 with a scores 454.I study very hard in the last two years.My grades increased a lot from GPA 2.99 to GPA 3.17. I naively thought I have a chance to being a recommendable postgraduate.However,what disappointed me is that my counselor told me I was not qualified to became a recommendable postgraduate because I had not pass the CET6.The chance of me to further studying is gone. So last night I decided to learn english. Threw myself into learning english.Is no longer a verbal agreement.Now my english is still very poor.I write this article with one hour and most of time spent on google translation. Tomorrow will be fine.Hope I have a better future!