题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;可适当增加从句和复合句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
With development of the economic and social.The people relationship is become more distrust that everybody alaways stay in each other a distrust state.In the social,whatever we happen anything.We should on maintaining trust. First,maintaining trust can heip our family keep a good atmosphere.Secondly,don't to guess and learn to trust can improve our mind and body health.Finally,maintaining trust is very important to help us to associate with true friends. As far as i concerned.On maintaining trust not only for ourself,but also for ever believe you family and friend,even stranger.So please learn to maintaining trust.