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What makes me a good friend I have a lot of friends who come from different classes. The reasons why there are so many people like me is because i am a honest, kindness,humorous. Friends in life was very important, it will be terrible without friends. If you often lie to somebody, he or she will never believe you again. I never do anything on purpose for my friends.