2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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The cartoon is said that people are crossing the street put mobile phone to be sticks.And the behavior is dangerous. As we all know,so far mobile phone already change part of our daily life.With developing scientific,It is important for anyone to use communication equipment in our rapidly developing the world.As far as i am concerned,there is good side and bad side to everything,it goes without saying that mobile phone reflect radiation is harm of people's body and eyes.Sometimes use mobile phone can waste time .Such as entry QQ 、chat with people and so on. In a other hands,however,it's useful.How did you said?Because it is helpful people to study and convenient. In a word,no matter what is thing.We should keep normality.