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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。
It is reported that some school incident of violence have been taked in the our countries from 2011. These incidents no doubt shocked countrymen and maked us couldn't help thinking: How to improve school safety, what we should to do to protect our students in school? There are some suggestions for how to imorove scool safety, firstly, we should strengthen the school safety guard. we need to get local safety bureau's support to diapatch at least one policeman to protect school safety, especially when students go to school time or after school home time. Secondly, related authorities need to set some class to teach students how to protect themselves when they faced dangerous. in these days, students have to kown what is the terrorism attachk and how to escape the crime spot when the terrorist attack misfortunely happend. For my opinion, I suggest that goverment should take some effective measures to improve school safety. As we all know, sochool safety is a vital matter for all parents and familys. if there no guarantee which parents can trust school safety, there are no good feedback for school education from parents. All in all, all society should contribute to some power to improve school safety in China because student is our future for country's development.
