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Dear Headmaster, i'm very glad to write a letter to you.These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions.First,I hope our school will can open much more library for us to learning and reading.second,we also hope that our school can organize as much as spare time activities to release our pressure.third,on the one hand,we want our teachers can be manage to make the lesson become interesting.on the other hand,we also want the lesson can be on time to the end . on the lesson ,teacher may not to say too much,but can not make our confused. Hope my suggestions will be hopeful. Thanks for reading my letter! Yours sincerely, Li Xiang
