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Nowadays,i believe the one disposal bags play a important role in our daily life.because people often use it.For example,when we are go shopping can often use it.And use it loaded garbage and so on.At the same time,it can make a problem about pollution.when the disposal bags ran out of,it will be burn.So it can make air pollution and it put these gas have poison will be cause people body.Besides,not only it happened pollution but also if it take outfit foods the same have harm. As far as i am concerned,i think should limit the use it.