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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12929
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly revealed in the picture above,a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. This art is said,Dear Andy-How are you?Your mother and I are fine.We both miss you and hope you are doing well.And so on!From this picture I understand,parents love us very much.Nowadays,with the development we can replace face-to-face contact online.Understanding news,stories from the Internet,also talking with replace face-to-face. In one word,the Internet makes the difference.Only in this way can we know more and more news,information,stories.

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