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Since hundreds and thousands of years ,a great many of influnces have happened between human activities and nature. Hence the development of human cannot get away from nature , the exitence of human depending on the Earth. As soon as we try our best to take some effective measures to protect the ecological environment, i believe we can realize the beautiful dream of geting well in harmony with nature. First we must respect nature and cannot disobey it by the way of doing some harmful things to break up rules, such as ecologic balance, hunting and killing some rare animals,changing some biological genes for any intention of privacy and overcuting the tropical forest and so on. We can give some guidances or trainings to our people according to all kinds of formats of advertising. Second, the law and rules are the essential way in the relationship of human activities and nature. we must make some effective laws to punish the behavior of breaking up nature. Some rules should be made to restrain the ways how to get much more useful nature . Last i believe that we must realize our dream and ge well with nature but respect and protect our environment hand in hand.
