2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping Nowadays more and more people would rather to shop Online in home instead of shopping outside.Shopping Online has both adwantages and diasdwantages. For one thing,It is convient for people to shop Online for people need not go out to choose espically when it is rainy or extremely hot.For another thing,people can compare the price between several shops easly to choose a cheap but nice thing. However,it also has some problems such as clothes is not suit.And some people even buy something terrible online. For my perspective,it is a not bad thing for people to shop online if we take enough care of the things we buy from line.