2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping Nowadays more and more people would rather shop Online at home instead of shopping outside.But to be honest shopping Online has both advantages and diasdvantages. For one thing,It is convenient for people to shop Online for people need not go out to choose especially when it is rainy or extremely hot.For another thing,people can compare the price between several shops easily to choose a cheap but nice thing. However,it also has some problems such as clothes is not suit.More worse, some people even buy something terrible online. For my perspective,it is a not bad thing for people to shop online if we take enough care of the things we buy from line.