2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Tom is one of my friends ,he will come to china ,i am going to take him around my hometown.there are many beautiful sights in my hometown,i will take him to see HUAYING mountain,it is very beatiful.the temperature of the mountain is nice ,not very hot,not very cold.And there are many trees in the mountain,i think he will like there.Except this ,i want to take him around the SIYUAN square,it is very big,and at the middale of the square ,a big ding are standing there,it looks grant,i am in favour of them.