2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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in China ,there is a going says "If we fail to reach the Great Wall we are not men". as we know, the great wall is know to one of the eighth wonder of the world. also the great wall is Chinese people’s pride ,the great wall was Built in the early Qin Dynasty