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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
September 15 2014 Today is Monday,it is a new week.Now I still feel that learning English is very difficult.The current situation is that I can't write a good article by use my unfamilar words,grammatical errors and unskilled sentence. I deeply agree that English is just a tool of communication in our life.But why do I learn english so difficult.A very important reason is that I rarely practice English.There is a saying that practice makes perfect.Without practice I find it difficult to learn English. The reason why I insist on learning English is that I want to live a meaningful life.Man's dearest possession is life.It is given to we but once.I don't want such a consequence that I am ashamed of my petty past until I am dead. So,pick up the confidence in learning English.Greet the new day with a new attitude!
