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Happiness is a beautiful word in the world.Everyone pursure it all the life. Happiness is not a absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them. Many people feel that they are not happy,and think that it;s hard to get the hippiness. Actully,it's easy to make happy. For example,we often face to the troubles and many difficult problems.There will make us feel pressured and upset.But we shouldn't affraid and disappointed.we should face up all the problem,and believe its will be solved by ourselves.when you don't give up and deal with the problem,the happiness will comes up to you. In addition,there are many people around us ,and ther will help,care and love us.we should love them,too.When we can help the people and make them smile,you will feel happy. In a word,the happiness is always around us.If you can deal with something in the right way,you will get the happiness.
