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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；全文结构较为严谨。
As is vividly show in the picture, we can see clear that there is a lamp, the ray is very bright. The more darker outside, the more brighter the lamp shine, from the photo of above, we can lern lots of things, lives is a best important love. The rhythm of modern society is faster and faster, some people get very coldness, they are less awareness about love, love is increasingly significant in our daily life. First, person in expanding numbers great emphasis on love, As a matter of fact, it is all almost acknowledged that love is the most essential qualification that anyone should possess. Second, people who have the ability of love well make considerable contribution to the society Without love, nothing well be achieved. Third, if we all pass love for everyone person, and our country will became full love, we well live more happy. And when we try to help anther person, we can also increase our value. All in all, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to enhance love. We should bear mind that love is valuable for ourselves and our social. When we face the difficulties, nothing is more vital than to contribution love into consideration. If we have no love, we well not able to succeed. We should try to build a world of love.
