2011年12月17日雅思写作真题:The Roots of Your Family

作者词汇基础扎实；文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

Nowadays,there are increasing number of people try to seek their families' roots in many ways.For example,Jackie Chen,a famous movie star who is still playing a important role in many new films,went to a remote countryside of Hebei province in the mainland of China to find the living place of his ancestors recently.Why that happened? The deepest reason to this phenomenon is that everyone has the instinct to figure out where he is from and which group or community he is belong to. Some crowds of people behave obviously,particularly the Chinese,but the others may never act like the former.However,we cannot deny that this instinct always exists in everybody's heart around the world. But it is difficult to answer whether this instinct good or not.People who disagree with it think it is so negative to our society because it must destroy the principle of our modern culture.Whereas I approve with it for its effect to the globalization.