2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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As the most interesting place in China is my home—Beijing.There are a lot of place of history interest.For example,The Great Wall,The Forbidden City and The Summer Palace and so on.The most bewitching is The Great Wall.It is one of the world culture heritage.What is more,The Great Wall is Chinese soul.The Great Wall has the history of 2000 years. There have a lots of travel who come from the world .Welcome you !