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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8978
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

September 16 2014 Today my mood was very bad and I felt getting terrible.The reason for this result is that I need to attend job fairs although I do not like to. Now,I am a senior student.My college life has been for three years.I enjoy my college life.So much I enjoy my college life but I will lose it next year just because I lose the opportunity of furthering studying. The reason for this is the cause of my bad english.However now I began to seriously learn english.How stupid I was.Why am I not determined to learn English a little earlier.If I was action earlier,the outcome is certainly not the case. Human always blames something for his own incompetence.I do not do this kind of person.I will tell myself:"Don't be a sore loser,don't linger on it and move forward.Pick up yourself where you are tumbled over.Stick to it,one day you will succeed!"

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