2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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In an age that adolescents are lack of the necessary guildance and supervision.we can never fail to be figure out the teenagers are become self-concious.Under this circumstance, the youngsters are more likely to believe in what they have listened or seen instead of thinking twice before drawing their conclusions,which is pathetically and undoubtedly considered controversil and unreasonable. The reason why I insist on the viewpoint that we should never directly and irresponsibly come to conclusions only by listening or seeing mainly lie in the following two aspects.To begin with ,It is a invariable law to every existence in the world that nothing will stay still even for one second. so are the things happening around us.what we see or listen may be just some special period of the development of things,which proves unstable and changeable.In addition,the perspectives we conclude just thourgh seeing or listening are usually one-sided.Drawing conclusions rashly is not objective enough to make our statements persuasive