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Hi Mary, I am going to Beijing due to on business travel tomorrow for one weeks. So I can not discuss about how are we hold company party of new year with you. it is up to you do all of this activity. once you decide on how to do this party .please tell me detail of this party. as well as I can prepare for something in advance. best regards /thanks Ming Li