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Mr. Johnson We have accepted 3000 piece of products of your company on 22nd ,December 2008. According to our signing of the No. 35 order that product quantities should be 3500 pieces. But we did not accept the rest of other products so far. please check your product list ,And we are looking forward to your early reply! Yours. Wang Haiyang