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Dear Mr. Johnson, We have received the 3,000 products from your company on December 22nd, 2008, but according to our signing of the No. 35 order, the number of products should be 3,500, the other 500 products we have not received so far. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours faithfully, Wang Hai yang