2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

作者词汇表达较多样灵活，也能较准确地使用学术词汇；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

From what is vividly depicted in the above picture,we can see distinctly that in front of computers and in narrow spaces are sitting many people who exchange their views by the internet.Most of people think the internet can draw closely the relations between people.On the contrary,others think it can make the relation distantly. On the basis of my observations,there are three factors contribute to this phenomenon. In the first place,a great number of people firmly believed that the internet can tell them conveniently knowledge that cannot be acquired from teachers or books.Usually,they think they can easily type some keywords into the search engine,therefore, everything that they wanted can be achieved.In the second place,it is excessively difficult for a lot of people to associate with friends.For instance,people who are working away from their hometown lonesomely cannot make many friends within short period.Consequently,they would like to release their pressures by internet.In the third place,more and more people don't like to express actual emotions with their parents,colleagues and friends.Hence,they usually communicate with strangers by internet. In short,the authority should guide people in the right way to use the internet and make some effective regulations to limit the crimes that can use the internet as their tools.Only in this way can we exert the advantages of the internet.