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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；能够简单运用一些从句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
When I heard you wanted to visit my hometown ,I was very glad .This is my honor to introduce my home. There is a place that I have got to show you,which is called Sanxia . There are so many sightseeing that I can not explain to you detailed. So I just talk to you the most worthiest to see. San Xia Ren JIa which I had traveled has the rustic scenery. people in which place have the simple way of life.When you came here,you could row dragon boats,step on the waterwheel.And you also could played games with the local people .The games which has been so many yeas that we cannot proved are very interested,which would make you forget your sadness .And you will find more interested things than which I said to you. Welcome to my hometown,I believe when you came,you would understand the true meaning of happy.
