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Living in an age that adolescents are lack of the necessary guildline and supervise.We can never fail to figure out the facts the teenagers are become especially self-conscious.Under this circumstance the youngsters are more likely to believe in what they have listened or seen instead of thinking twice before drawing their conclusions.Which is pathetically and undoubtedly cosidered controversial or even unreasonable. The reason why I insist the viewpiont that we should never directly and irresponsibility come to conclusions only by listening or seeing mainly lie in the following two aspects: To begin with,it is a invariable law to every existence in the world that nothing will stay still even for just one second. So are the things happening around us.What we see or listen may be just some particular time of the development of things,which proves unstable and changeable.In addition,the perspectives we conclude just though seeing or listening are usually one-side.Drawing conclusions rashly is not objective enough to make the statement persuative. To sum up,it is unwise for us to define any thing as what we assume or imagine at frist sight. Only by our serious thinking and accurate analyzing can we come up with more rational and reasonable condusions.
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