2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Now,there are more and more people use the mobie phone in their life. Like the photo show:People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. Many people will feel uncomfortable without the cell phone. we can't deny that the mobie phone is very important in our life.On the one hand,we can keep in touch with people though the phone.It's quick and convenient. On the other hand,there are many informations in the mobie phone from the nenetwork,so that we can get something what we want to understand.Morever,people can share own mood or story. However,many people have a conversation with others is becoming harder.Why?Because they are lost themselves in the mobie phone.They seem to forget how to talk with people in the true life. It will make them so afaid to talk to people that they will leave the true life farer and farer. In the words,the mobie phone is important in our life,but we should know how to use in the right way,