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The internet a word was spoke in table family ,we knew it is advantages and disadvantages.How are we use to it?This is a very important problem,we should find a way to use to it.It is easing ,convenient and faster in study part and work part,it makes our life more and more nice.At the same times,it bring some bad influences,for example ,let many teenagers were addicted to net games.The study had such a big influence. In a word, the most things have two part,On the one hand is a good ,instead of bad. Whether we can reasonable use is a key,we should full use of it's advantages,and try our best to avoid it's disadvantages.if you do it,i believe the internet will is your friend and teacher.your have a good time in your life.
