小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friends ,he is a sunshine boy. he have two big eye , he is very clever .he like reading english book in the morning.his height 170cm , he ofen help us with study ,our ofen play basketball together he allways play basketball very nice we are good friends forever.