小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend is Lily,she was a friendly girl. Lily love to listen to music,and her voice is very nice.When I was along one,she follow me and singing song.I like this feel and her voice. Lily has a good hobby.When she staring go to school,her mon require that Lily must to be a independent girl.So Lily washing herself clothes from that time.