小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,he is a sunshine boy. he has two big eyes, He is very clever.He likes reading english book in the morning.his height 170cm , He ofen help us with study ,our ofen play basketball together and he always play basketball very nice we are good friends forever.