2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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September 17 2014 Today I went to KTV to sing with my friends.I think singing is a good way to relax ourselves.Our own hearts discontent will vent out through singing. As it know to all,a good feeling is necessary for us,because a lot of the time when we do things with bad mood we will work with a low efficiency.We can hardly optimistic life if we don't have a good mood. To sum it up,life is perfect,and we should seriously enjoy every day when we still alive.So no matter happens,we should always be confident in our life,and we must believe in ourselves.As long as we learn every day,the goal is getting closer and closer to us.Ultimately we will be able to reach the other side of success through our own efforts!