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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Juger from the note we can konw that have a hight educatiom who can got earn hight salary and eary got the jop. Like who have Doctoral degree can earning 1,551 very week,on the other have less than high school diploma who the unemployment rate arrive to 14.1, which more higher than the average. So it tell we that have a high educatiom is important for our. On the other hand have a high degree is not most important fearcure in employment rate, from the unemployment rate and median weekiy earning in 2011 among the doctoral degree and the professional degree we can understand that we high see to person professional but not high degree . Well we must put our hear in our person professional increating.

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