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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13038
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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可适当增加从句和长句的使用;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

If we have to keep relationship with others, we can not avoid communication with all kind of people. Why is that? I think there are four main reasons. The first one is that communication makes us work more efficiently. Though communicating, we can know partenerr's idea about our job and cooperate with eachone well.this is what needed to finish a job perfectly. The second reason is that it help getting ourselves understand by others. we express our thoughts clearly to others though communication to avoid being misunderstand, then we can easily get a better relationship with our friends. the third reason is that we can get information and knowledge from others though communicaton. every one has a precious experience that worth to be understand. though communication, we know anther world to broad our eyes. the fourth reason is that it extends our speaking skills, you practice more and you will be better. so, as communication is so important, we need to talk more, listening more and understand better.

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